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Reb at Blackmoor - my version of what could have happened

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Episode 21





Beverley enters the sick bay at 19h30 and immediately notices that Reb seems jumpy and edgy when she comes in

Beverley: "Is everything all right Kean."

Reb: "Yeah, why would'nt it be?, did you remember to bring my sleeping pill."

Beverley: "You just seemed a bit nervous and jumpy when I came in, that's all, and yes, here's the sleeping tablet."

Reb: "Thanks." she takes the sleeping tablet and swollows it with a glass of water and lies back down on the pillows

Beverley: "Someone will be along to check on you later."

Reb: "Not a certain screw, I hope."

Beverley: "Now Kean, I can't allow you to speak about  fellow officers like that, I could have you on an insolence charge you know."

Reb: "Come on, I'm not blind, I can tell you don't like her anymore than the rest of us in here."

Beverley: "How much I like or dislike onother officer is not the issue Reb, the point is there is a certain professionalism that needs to be maintained."

Reb: "Yeah right, like when push comes to shove, you screws will all stick together and back on another up, right."

Beverley trying to appear stern: 'That will do Kean, another word and you'll be on an insolence charge."

Reb: "Yeah , all right, I'm sorry."

Beverley: "Right then, as I said just now, someone will check on you later, and you don't have to worry about Miss Leach coming along tonight, she's only due back on Monday

Reb: "I've got to make sure I'm out of here by then."

Beverley: "Unless you get some rest, you most certainly will still be here on Monday."

Reb: "Thanks Miss Carter, I think I'm starting to get sleepy now."

Beverley: "Thats good, try to relax and get a good nights sleep, Officer Mason should be around later to check on you, Goodnight."

Reb: "Night, .....once Beverley has left, "I knew you hated that fat ugly dyke bitch screw almost as much as I do."...she falls asleep
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Margo has just walked into one of the cells

Margo: "I've got the stuff, have you got the dough."

Inmate: "Yeah, how much."

Margo: "Grass $5, coke $10."

Inmate: "Bloody rip off."

Margo: "Listen if you don't want it just say so, there's plenty of others interested if you don't want it."

Inmate: "I'm sorry Margo, it's just that it cost a lot less the last time."

Margo: "Listen Cheryl, I'm the one taking all the risks here, it's my neck that gets the chop if I get caught sneaking the stuff in here."

Cheryl: "Yeah, yeah alright", she takes out $15, "I'll have a bag of coke and a bag of grass (marijuana)."*

Margo: "Right, I'll bring the stuff in 10 minutes time." she leaves Cheryl's cell, she then takes the money out of her pocket, takes a few notes from the wad of cash goes to her cell and hides it in a powder container, she then heads to Kathy's cell, Kathy is lying on the bed looking at the ceiling

Kathy: "Well, did you manage to sell all the stuff."

Margo: "Yeah, I've just sold the last of it right now."

Kathy: "Hand over the dough then." Margo gives her the money, Kathy counts it then says, "Thats not all of it, where's the rest of it Gaffney."

Margo: "Whaddaya mean the rest of it, that's all of it, honest."

Kathy jumps off the bed and grabs Margo: "Don't play me for a fool Gaffney, I saw you take some of the money and hide it in your cell."

Margo: "Ok, Ok, I only took 10 bucks."

Kathy gives Margo a slap across the face: "Only $10, you thieving mole, more like $20+, now go get the rest of it before I really beat the crap outta you."

Margo goes out the cell muttering once outside: "One day I'd like an opportunity to really thump you, you bitch."

Janie and Jenny overhear Margo and give one another a smile
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Janie: "Maybe we can try get Margo on side, once Marie comes out of the pound, we can all come up with some way to get even with Bates and Kean."

Margo comes out of her cell with the rest of the money

Janie: "We need to talk, Margo."

Margo: "Yeah, what about."

Janie: "About fixing Bates and Kean for good, you know it's because of them that Marie's in the pound."

Margo: "What makes you think I want anything to do with helping Winter."

Janie: "You know Marie, it's not her fault that time you got caught, apart from that one time, Marie has always done the right thing by you."

Margo: "Look I've gotta go, lets talk about this later."

Janie: "No worries, we've got lots of time, you know where to find us."

Margo goes back to Kathy's cell takes out the money and gives it to Kathy

Kathy: "Now Gaffney, that's much better, honesty is always the best policy, don't you agree."

Margo: "Huh?."

Kathy: "So how much of the cut do you think you deserve to get for trying to have you hand in the cookie jar."

Margo says nothing

Kathy: "By rights you should get nothing, but seeing I'm in a generous mood tonight, Ill give you 10% instead of the nothing  you deserve." she takes a couple of notes and gives it to Margo, "Now rack off and tell them  they can collect their stuff, and try not to get caught."

Margo: "Come on Kathy, we agreed on 25%, I'm the one taking all the risks you know."

Kathy: "That was before you tried to screw me over, now beat it before I change my mind and you get nothing."

Margo leaves Kathy's cell, just then Susan comes in

Susan: "What's wrong with Margo, she sure seemed mad about something."

Kathy: "She thought she make a fast buck at our expense, but I cottoned on to her little plan and made her cough up."

Susan: "What did she do.?"

Kathy: "She was selling the stuff at more than the going rate, she was supposed to sell the coke for $8 instead of $10 and selling the grass for $5 instead of $3, making $4 bucks profit on the side and then expecting to get a 25% cut on top of it."

Susan: "She's got a bloody nerve, how did you find out about it."

Kathy: "One of the women came charging in here and bitched about how the price skyrocketed from when Winter was bringing the stuff in, apparently Marie was selling it for just over half of what Margo asked, I had to make up some half baked story about the supplier charging more for the delivery and the next lot would'nt be as much she seemed to accept it, so no real damage has been done, were still in business."

Just then Dot walks into the cell: "Now then are you 2 almost ready for bed, it'll be lock up in 5 minutes."

Susan: "Oh hell, we'd better get into our pyjamas."
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Meanwhile Margo has just finished handing out the stuff to the women who bought it as the last one leaves the cell, Janie and Jenny come in

Janie: "Given anymore thought to what we discussed earlier, Margo?"

Margo: "I've thought about nothing but that since I last saw you."

Janie: "Did Bates give a better cut of the takings than Marie ever gave you."

Margo: "The lousy bitch screwed me over, she only gave me 10% when I should have got at least 25%, I mean after all I was the one running around taking the risks, her and that bitch Kean have made sure that there's nothing to implicate themselves if anyone of them get caught."

Janie: "Margo, how would you like to help us bring both Bates and Kean down for good, I mean Marie has always done the right thing by you and given you what you've always agreed on, you must admit Marie does look out for those that get on side with her."

Margo: "Yeah I was better off with Marie, I see that now, If I decide to back you and Marie, how are we gonna Kean and Bates, Janie, they've already outsmarted us all a few times?"

Janie: "I've got a plan, but I'll have to tell you about it tomorrow sometime, it's lockup just now."

Just then Jennifer Mason and Beverley Carter arrive

Jennifer: "Why aren't you in you cells and in your pyjamas, lockup is in 2 minutes."

Margo: "Sorry Miss Mason, was just telling Turner something."

Beverley: "Well you can continue your conversation tommorrow, now get cracking at once."

Margo, Janie and Jenny all go to their cells
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In Kathy, Dot and Susan cell are in their pajamas and in bed

Jennifer comes in to lockup :"Goodnight ladies"

Kathy: "Goodnight.", Dot and Susan also say goodnight

Jennifer closes the cell door and locks it
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In the staffroom, Beverley and Jennifer are having a 30 minute coffee break before resuming the next round

Jennifer: "I hope we have a quiet night tonight, I'm still suffering from that double shift and I'm still tired even although I went straight to bed when I got home this morning and only woke up an hour before I was due back."

Beverley: "Lets hope so too, although I'm due to go off after the next round anyway, Olivia White should be here ready to go on duty with by the time we finish the next patrol."

Jennifer: "I think we should check in on Kean first as she went to sleep quite some time before the others, besides she's alone in sick bay."

Beverley: "Hopefully she'll be fast asleep, you know when I went to give her that sleeping pill she was all edgy and agitated, and seemed petrified in case Cynthia Leach would come to see here while she was there."

Jennifer: "I think she may have a reason to be anxious about Cynthia, last night when I told Cynthia I was'nt going to stand by and take her vile tactics anymore, she threatened me, I have a gut feeling that Leach doesn't make idle threats, and she could be gunning for me, I also heard her threatening Kean as well with something like "teaching her manners and respect and the correct way to address and officer." as I came back after taking Bates back to her cell well after 03h00 , it was the way in which Cynthia said it to Kean that I find particularly disturbing, I just don't know what to do Bev, I don't want to appear to want to take the word of an inmate over an officer, but the fact remains Leach was wrong with the punishments she gave out, and especially the length of time it went on for, and very wrong with the way she intimidated them all, especially Kean"

Beverley: "That goes a long way to explaining why Kean was so nervous in case Cynthia would be on duty tonight, Kean was trying to ascertain whether I liked Cynthia or not, the point isn't whether I do or don't, but as professionals we have to act as professionals, I think may know my personal feelings towards Cynthia, without me having to admit to them."

Jennifer:"Lets just say this place would be much more pleasant to be at, were she never to come back."

Beverley: "I could'nt agree more, anyway coffee break is almost over, we better get on patrol."

They get up from the table, put their cups in the sink and go down the hallway
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In the sickbay, Reb Kean is fast asleep....

In Kathy, Susan and Dots cell all are asleep...the scene changes from the present to..
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1973

At Phil Bates' house, Phil his wife Maggie, their 2 kids Desiree and Jack and Kathy and David are all sitting down, they are all wearing their best clothes

Phil to David and Kathy: "Now you 2 had better be on your best behaviour tonight, It's very important that you create a good impression and not embarrass me when the boss and his wife comes to dinner."

David: "But were always on our best hehaviour, and we've never embarrassed you?"

Phil: "Don't answer me back or you'll get the hiding of your life, as for not being an embarrasment to me, what about when you and your friends had that fight at school with Jack and his friends, and the principal of the school calling me in, and don't tell me that it's Jack and his friends fault."

David does'nt say anything

Phil: "So who's fault was it, then.", David still says nothing, Kathy looks scared, Phil starts unbuckling his belt and moves towards David: "I said, who's fault was it."

David: "It was my fault."

Phil: "Good, now you've admitted it." he starts putting his belt back on again, they all sit in silence for 5 minutes, then the doorbell rings, "Go answer the door." to Kathy, Kathy gets up and answers the door, there is a man in his early 50's and woman in her late 30's standing outside

Kathy: "Please come in, my name is Kathy, my uncle Phil and aunt Maggie are waiting for you."

Man with a nice friendly smile: "Pleased to meet you Kathy, I'm Mr Forbes."

Mrs Forbes: "You are a very pretty girl, Kathy, I'm Mrs Forbes."

Kathy with a nervous smile: "Thank you, Mrs Forbes, Please come through to the lounge." they follow Kathy to the lounge, there Phil introduces everyone around, once finished

Phil to Mr and Mrs Forbes: "Can we get you something to drink?"

Mrs Forbes: "I'd love a cup of tea, if possible."

Mr Forbes: "I'd like one as well, please."

Maggie: "Right, I'll go put the kettle on, Kathy would you come and give me hand, please."

Kathy gets up and goes with Maggie into the kitchen, once in the kitchen

Maggie to Kathy: "And try not to be clumsy and spill anything when you take it through."

Kathy does'nt say anything and makes her way through to the lounge with all the refreshments on one tray

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Back in the lounge, the adults are drinking tea, the kids cold drink, after a bit of casual conversation, John Forbes turns to the kids

John: "And what would you all like to be when you grow up?"

Jack: "I'd like to be a graphics designer."

Phil beaming: "Yes, our Jack is very good at designing things from his imagination."

Desiree: "I'd like to be a lawyer."

Evelyn Forbes: "That's nice dear, it's great that so many women are wanting to become lawyers these days."

John to David: "And what would you like to be when you grow up, David."

David: "I'd really like to become a civil engineer when I grow up, Mr Forbes." as he finishes Phil Bates' snorts and bursts out laughing

Phil when finished laughing: "Civil engineer, you have to really be brainy to become a civil engineer." (Desiree and Jack laugh)

David looking downcast and embarrassed: "I guess I'll just become a cop when I grow up, so I can lock up the bad guys."

Evelyn looking distressed and embarrassed for David and trying not to show it says to Kathy: "And what would you like to become when you grow up, Kathy?"

Kathy: "All I want to be is happy, maybe meet a nice man and settle down with a couple of kids."

John (before Phil can open his mouth): "Now that sounds like a nice thing to want to be when you grow up, Kathy."
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A couple of hours later, it's clear that John and Evelyn Forbes are much more impressed with Kathy and David than with Phil's own kids Desiree and Jack

As the evening is coming to a close

Evelyn to David and Kathy: "You know Mr Forbes and I live in a nice big house with a lovely big garden and swimming pool, how would you like to be able to come and visit us now and again."

Kathy with excitement: "That would be so nice, can we please uncle Phil."

David: "Oh please, uncle Phil."

John: "Of course, Desiree and Jack would be welcome to come and visit as well, if they wanted to."

Phil to David and Kathy with a masked grin on his face: "I'll have to think about it."

John: "How about you all come to our place next saturday, at 15h00 for a barbeque and swim just to see what it like

Jack: "That sounds cool, how about it, Dad."

Phil after thinking: "Yeah why not, that sounds great."

Evelyn: "It's settled then."

John getting up: "Well I'd like to thank you all for a great evening, Phil I'll see you at the office Monday."

Evelyn: "It's been a pleasure to meet you all, Maggie the dinner was lovely, thanks so much."

They all go outside and wait till the Forbes get in their car they wave, once the car is out of site

Phil (his horrible grin gone) to David and Kathy: "Get inside and get the mess cleaned up, now"

Both Kathy and David rush inside to clean the dishes
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Evelyn and John Forbes have just got home, Evelyn has been quiet the whole time

John: "What's wrong my love, when you get this quiet something's really troubling you."

Evelyn: "John, I can't put my finger on it, but I have the most horrible gut instinct that David and Kathy are abused and neglected children."

John: "Evie, whatever makes you think that, Ok, it's clear to anyone that Phil and Maggie think their own kids are the beesknees compared to Kathy and David or any other kid for that matter, but what makes you think they're being abused."

Evelyn: "Darling I love you, you know I do, but you're not the most intuitive person I've ever known, I saw the hurt and rejection in David's eyes when Phil made fun of him wanting to become a civil engineer, and his cousins laughed with Phil, I also know that Kathy said what she said just so they would'nt laugh at her as well

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Kathy wakes up in a cold sweat just as the bell goes off for them to all get up for the morning showers

Dot: "Are you allright love?"

Kathy: "Yeah, it was just a dream, that's all."

Susan gets up just as Jennifer comes and unlocks the cells

Jennifer: "Right, time to go to the showers."

In the corridor Margo is walking with Janie and Jenny

Margo: "I tell you, I've thought about it long and hard and I've decided to definately back you up on this Janie, I'd like to see both those bitches pay, especially Bates."

Janie: "That's great Margo, listen we'll talk more during exercise period today, hopefully Marie will be out of the pound by tomorrow."

Margo: "I'd better not make it too obvious that I'm too friendly with you in front of them, that way I can make them think I'm still on side with them."

Janie: "Yeah, great thinking Margo" she sees Kathy, Susan and Dot and softly elbows Margo in the gut, "Sorry Gaffney, did'nt see you there."

Margo: "You clumsy stupid bitch, why don't you watch where you going and what you're doing."

Jennifer: "Move a lot faster than you are right now, I don't have all morning, Gaffney, Turner you should have been at the showers already."

Margo: "Yeah, all right I'm going." to Janie "You'll get yours." she moves on ahead, Janie goes after her

Kathy: "How thrilling it is to see 2 stupid moles at one anothers throats first thing in the morning."

Jennifer: "The same thing applies to you as well as Gaffney and Turner, Bates, get cracking all of you."

They all move to the shower block
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In the sickbay, Reb has just woken up and realised she's still in the sickbay: "Geez terrific, I've gotta get out of here today." just then she hears the door to the doctors room being opened
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Episode 22

To be continued (Reb tries to convince Robert to let her go back with the others)


Apologies for the delay I will start with ep 22 in the next 2 weeks as I have just moved home.
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